This is a blog about poetry, all poems, occasional short storys. All me.
Stairways
Stairways
and
A gate
Between Two worlds
Up and down
They can be dangerous
One false move and
They bring pain and suffering
Dogs try to go
They really do
But we invented a way
To stop them
It is called a gate
13 comments:
Well done. So very well done. (That's an interesting staircase.)
What an unusual stairway! A gate between two worlds - I remember a time that my baby brother certainly looked as though he felt that way as he was trapped in his world all those many years ago!
The poem mirrors the unusual stairway. Fascinating.
i've never thought of a stairway as a gate between two worlds...
Those are some wild looking stairs! I really enjoyed reading your words. :~)
I like your poem, thank you for posting it. Yes, your stairs do seem a bit tricky to navigate!
Did you know I had a profile of my own? But I write on Jim's blog, so far.
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so ture, teh dichotomy of ups and downs can be painful or challenging
nicely done! fascinating stairway...
Very interesting view of stairs. Since my husband is confined to a wheelchair, more often I think of a staircase as a barrier between two worlds.
BTW-is that a real staircase?
as previously sed, most curious steps... i wonder if one has to think before taking a step... excellent poem to the prompt
..Hi Adi,
Couldn't stare away from ur 'Stairway'.Then looked up ur profile-and loved it.Honestly haven't seen any Harry Potter movie so far but i am sure ur poem fits right into that magical world..many thanks for sharing this..(ps:ur=your)
Hi BP,
my apolgies on the mistake regarding ur name.'poetry by adi' duped me actually.best wishes..
ps:apolgies>apologies!
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