Saturday, August 9, 2008

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This is a blog about poetry, all poems, occasional short storys. All me.
Stairways




Stairways
and
A gate
Between Two worlds
Up and down
They can be dangerous
One false move and
They bring pain and suffering
Dogs try to go
They really do
But we invented a way
To stop them
It is called a gate

13 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

Well done. So very well done. (That's an interesting staircase.)

barbs.haiku said...

What an unusual stairway! A gate between two worlds - I remember a time that my baby brother certainly looked as though he felt that way as he was trapped in his world all those many years ago!

Pam said...

The poem mirrors the unusual stairway. Fascinating.

qualcosa di bello said...

i've never thought of a stairway as a gate between two worlds...

Fledgling Poet said...

Those are some wild looking stairs! I really enjoyed reading your words. :~)

Adi said...

I like your poem, thank you for posting it. Yes, your stairs do seem a bit tricky to navigate!
Did you know I had a profile of my own? But I write on Jim's blog, so far.
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DeLi said...

so ture, teh dichotomy of ups and downs can be painful or challenging

tumblewords said...

nicely done! fascinating stairway...

gardenpath said...

Very interesting view of stairs. Since my husband is confined to a wheelchair, more often I think of a staircase as a barrier between two worlds.

BTW-is that a real staircase?

OneMoreBeliever said...

as previously sed, most curious steps... i wonder if one has to think before taking a step... excellent poem to the prompt

zoya gautam said...

..Hi Adi,
Couldn't stare away from ur 'Stairway'.Then looked up ur profile-and loved it.Honestly haven't seen any Harry Potter movie so far but i am sure ur poem fits right into that magical world..many thanks for sharing this..(ps:ur=your)

zoya gautam said...

Hi BP,
my apolgies on the mistake regarding ur name.'poetry by adi' duped me actually.best wishes..

zoya gautam said...

ps:apolgies>apologies!